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Your writing is warm and appealing, a treasure chest waitng to be uncovered.joab
posted by
joab3
on February 14, 2010 at 6:18 AM
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Writing
Hi fem, I try to look at profiles, well I've just started doing that. Now to the poem, you really are feeling your way into this one the cave bit is quite revealing, I wonder if you are hinting that we might turn to eating anything, if we were starving, quite likely. A happy day to you to
posted by
C_C_T
on February 14, 2010 at 5:05 AM
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I really thought the end was perfect, but it had many ways it could be interpreted! I believe I would see it a different wy on a second read as well! Very strong imagery throughout! Happy Valentine's Day! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on February 13, 2010 at 8:02 PM
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Like I went into a cave
Like I went into a cave and there were writings on the wall
Such interesting writings and I had to read it all. Love it Lloyd
posted by
BIGINKDOT
on February 13, 2010 at 4:56 PM
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What a great poem!
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on February 13, 2010 at 3:58 PM
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Fema, textbook ponderings and musings of a writer. This has great imagery and imagination and creativity that makes my muse want to fly ~
- Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on February 13, 2010 at 1:59 PM
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