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Re: Excellent and very touching
Thank you Skye
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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Re: BC-A
Each day brings it's moments of inspiration, I think.
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 7:04 AM
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Re: Merkie
thank you so much, my friend, I am glad you enjoyed this one
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 6:50 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you so much my dear, that means a lot to me xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 6:47 AM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 6:39 AM
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Re: sam444
Thank you sam, you have seen right through to the heart of what I was saying, and how
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 6:37 AM
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Re: I Wish
Very true Fema, and each moment of loss bares a lesson necessary for times of plenty too
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 6:31 AM
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Re: TAPS
Thanks Taps, I'd normally agree with you on that - I went through a moment of self pity and decided to drag the inspiration out of it
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 6:28 AM
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Re: such longing and sadness emotions that rose inside me as I read.....
Thank you so much Kabu
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 6:23 AM
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Re: Elyse
Thank you sweetie, luckily for me this was a passing mood
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 6:20 AM
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Excellent and very touching
I would not have wanted to miss the magic of my love even though I miss Richard so much now. It is the Magic of Love that warms my heart on these cold winter days.
posted by
skye08
on February 12, 2010 at 1:38 AM
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It keeps your mind busy. Maybe you’ll find another inspiration. T BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on February 11, 2010 at 10:00 PM
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You present the heartaches of lonliness and it is good to share the sweet memories of comfot and bliss . Life and love intermingle in the most unique ways tha enthrall and entice us to ask for more. A true valentine of desire Lion Excelllent!
posted by
merkie
on February 11, 2010 at 8:50 PM
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Wow Neil... I know just what you mean... Wishing not to have known what to wish for :-) but you are right, what would life be without love but an empty nothing... the pain, the loneliness... the longing... its all worth it if when we close our eyes we can feel for even a second the marvelous sensation of touching with ours their lips... or if we can imagine what has never been but may yet be <<<sigh>>> You are truly a master poet my friend xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 11, 2010 at 7:58 PM
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Your emotions are expressed so good even when sadness is the name of our song
Keep on the good work. Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 11, 2010 at 6:23 PM
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Longing can be overwhelming at times! But this is excellent! I loved this:
And yet that miracle I complain of,
That makes each moment with you ecstasy
And bathes our days in gentle bliss I thought the use of miracle was very powerful, just because it feels the way it's stated! Bathing in gentle bliss, YES INDEED! This was well written and worth a picture of a thousand words as it were. (Love reversals and this poem fit in, well as though a miracle in its own right) sam
posted by
sam444
on February 11, 2010 at 5:51 PM
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I Wish
Lionreign, I agree with Taps..Better to have loved..I know very well to have lost a loved one..It seem the heart reminds you occasionally the hurt but we must move on for tomorrow the Sun shall rise again..Love is just around the corner.Lv. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on February 11, 2010 at 3:54 PM
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Well done. I am a true believer in that it's better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 11, 2010 at 2:26 PM
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such longing and sadness emotions that rose inside me as I read.....
your work is so excellent that you always bring my emotions to the fore. Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on February 11, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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I could quote platitudes but I won't - something trite but I sha'nt ~ this touched my heart - for the feelings it moves to the reader - you know after I read this I hear that tune in my head..."can we still be friends"
it can be corny but I remember a time when I was feeling so lost after a divorce - this helped me understand and come to grips with 'friendship' and beginnings again - in a different light. Just a memory after I read this. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 11, 2010 at 9:27 AM
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