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Just so beautiful Sinome..I could see the whole thing so clearly. Have a lovely Valentine's Day - you and yours.
posted by
shobana
on February 12, 2010 at 8:51 PM
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ah to enjoy languor in dream and rest and respite ~ this is so cozy and sweet - romantic and divine ~ Sinome xooxox - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 12, 2010 at 5:37 PM
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very colorful romantic poem
posted by
Lanetay
on February 12, 2010 at 3:50 PM
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When I am free to dream
An extremely iridescent poem. The line 'fly into the blue and pink, cotton-cloud spotted sky' is superb.
posted by
2Philomena
on February 12, 2010 at 10:02 AM
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Very pretty
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on February 12, 2010 at 7:18 AM
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oh this is beautifully romantic
I am absolutely enchanted by it, it is wonderful, thank you for sharing it sweetie oxoxoxoxxo
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2010 at 6:49 AM
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You are so talented and I relate to you poems so much
posted by
skye08
on February 12, 2010 at 1:40 AM
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It’ll you’re your world brighter love. T BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on February 11, 2010 at 10:04 PM
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Sinome
I wish we could contemplate the colours as the sun greets the day as beautifully as you espressed it here. Lovely
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 11, 2010 at 8:55 PM
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A wonderful dream that must be. Hope the waking up is not a disappointment.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 11, 2010 at 4:17 PM
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People want the dream. The more unattainable, the more we want it.
Who wants to fall in love with what is within the grasp?
You make dreaming sound so wonderful.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 11, 2010 at 12:45 PM
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poem
Yes this is a nice poem dream, softly it flows as you float into its essence.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 11, 2010 at 12:05 PM
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You remain way ahead of so many other poets one reads on the Internet.
posted by
Kabu
on February 11, 2010 at 10:22 AM
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I really love the flow and dance of your poems...they can elicit such
emotion from your readers! Good stuff, Simone!
posted by
Ariala
on February 11, 2010 at 5:54 AM
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