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I laughed a lot when I read this. You depicted it so humorously. I thought 'pure poetry in motion' and 'My ruby lips kissed the newly washed floor' were wonderful. We've all been there!
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2Philomena
on February 12, 2010 at 10:17 AM
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The Slip
Lovely! Someone once said, "He who can laugh at himself shall never want for amusement". And a few years ago during a Winter Olympics our local paper carried a cartoon showing someone slipping going whoops! outside a store, with three people behind the window holding up cards saying "9" "10" "10".
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2902
on February 11, 2010 at 5:48 PM
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The Slip
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2902
on February 11, 2010 at 5:43 PM
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It was without a doubt pure poetry in motion! What a great poem! I enjoyed every line! sam
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sam444
on February 11, 2010 at 5:36 AM
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