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I hope it's that flutter before the stability
posted by
Straightforward
on February 16, 2010 at 1:40 AM
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Simple and meaningful.
posted by
numberonemcfan
on February 14, 2010 at 6:12 PM
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Suttle and sweet. I loved it
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on February 13, 2010 at 3:40 PM
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That is beautiful. It made my heart flutter a bit.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 12, 2010 at 1:09 PM
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Marvelous...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 11, 2010 at 12:26 AM
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You sound with peace and this is lovely ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 10, 2010 at 10:28 PM
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Beautiful
Regards, Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 10, 2010 at 8:13 PM
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What a fantastic close and an awesome tercet:
I watch the sun rise
I see the life awaken
My soul flutters
LOVE IT! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 10, 2010 at 7:33 PM
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I sense so much excitement with this!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 10, 2010 at 4:07 PM
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Ahhh the fluttering of the soul is such an unbelievable sensation :-) Great poem sweetie xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 10, 2010 at 9:46 AM
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Calia14
Nothing like a morning vision to stir ones awakening nice morning. Lv. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on February 10, 2010 at 8:10 AM
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