Go to Bernard Franklin's poetry
- Add a comment
- Go to THE CROSS,
nicely done
that is a point well made and a very descriptive poem
posted by
lionreign
on February 8, 2010 at 7:25 AM
| link to this | reply
The melancholy flows beautifully. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on February 8, 2010 at 5:58 AM
| link to this | reply
How poignant was that! The most valued possession was one of honor! What happens to men who are highly decorated and yet never seem to overcome the effects of war! Awesome poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 8, 2010 at 2:13 AM
| link to this | reply
I really like your poetry. A man like this started coming to our church about a year ago. Many have done what they can to help him is small ways. He is doing much better and is happier. It's "easier" for people to ignore the homeless and down and outers, but God sees all of them all the time.
posted by
mariposa75
on February 7, 2010 at 9:44 PM
| link to this | reply
How very sad. This is so poignant...touched my heart - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 7, 2010 at 8:32 PM
| link to this | reply
I love the flow of your poem and the rhyming
Chuck. Also thanks for visiting my blog.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 7, 2010 at 1:24 PM
| link to this | reply
cross
brill finish Bernie I have one about a tramp but not so dramitic as yours
well done
posted by
C_C_T
on February 7, 2010 at 12:25 PM
| link to this | reply