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Outstanding! I adore it! Imagine that, I could see cows with parasols,, although I was in udder disbelief! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on February 7, 2010 at 11:56 PM
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What a delightful poem. Enjoyed it very much.
posted by
shobana
on February 7, 2010 at 2:45 AM
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You are a very clever poet!
posted by
Darson
on February 6, 2010 at 5:42 PM
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Rule Britania......this is superb......itis wasted here.needs a much wider
audience....I love the way the sparrow carefully leaves the spider alone....winter time larder. How neat.
posted by
Kabu
on February 6, 2010 at 10:22 AM
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J:( I think of Jonathan Swift and Lewis Carroll. For a while the British have demonstrated a knack for applying wit to imagery. Good job sir. BC-A, Bill’s Roost
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BC-A
on February 6, 2010 at 10:13 AM
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Carnckake.Great story poem I loved every word from the spiders web to the water quenching ones thirst in a mixture to enjoy as I did imagining the picture painted in my mind to enjoy.. Your sparrow the story teller. Wonderful job. I love your works. Fema
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fememefeme
on February 6, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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