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posted by
Star5_
on February 8, 2010 at 9:28 AM
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sweet!
posted by
Star5_
on February 8, 2010 at 9:26 AM
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it's metamorphisis you eloquently write of - and so free in its lyrical flight ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 5, 2010 at 8:34 AM
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Re: Open
Thank you so much, 2Philomena
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 7:32 AM
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Re: sam444
I agree completely... eyes, mind heart and parachute... all things that work best when open
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 7:28 AM
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Re: Snowview
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 7:05 AM
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Re: Simone
Thank you so much, my dear, I do my best to remember how wonderful the world is at all times and everything else just comes from that
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 7:00 AM
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Re: Open
Thanks 2902, I hadn't noticed that, but then I do tend to get an idea or an image and then explore it over the course of a few poems before moving on.
It does help sometimes... particularly on those days when inspiration leaves mid poem 
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 6:58 AM
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Re: This is fabulous and so positive,,,,you are truly being the best that you
thank you so much, Kabu
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 6:52 AM
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Re: Wonderfully done, my friend! Very thought inducing and flows perfectly..
thank you so much, PoetRaye
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 6:46 AM
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Re: Lionreign
Thanks BF
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 6:43 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thank you, I am delighted you like it
posted by
lionreign
on February 5, 2010 at 6:39 AM
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Open
What a wonderfully uplifting poem!
posted by
2Philomena
on February 5, 2010 at 5:06 AM
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I think open of heart and eye is the key!The possibilities become endless! Awesome imagery that set it on the line from the onset and followed up very nicely! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 5, 2010 at 2:25 AM
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Wonderful attitude!
posted by
Nita09
on February 4, 2010 at 11:52 PM
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f I think that your poem shows that attitude’s a seed for a better tomorrow. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on February 4, 2010 at 10:54 PM
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My sweet friend, you ARE the best there is :-) Some speak of openness and live in deceit, preach social awareness and generosity while their actions show elitist selfishness and uncaring cruelty... You on the other hand are your poems and your poems are you, full of optimism and love of life . I feel so priviledged to be able to read you. Take care of you xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 4, 2010 at 7:23 PM
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Open
Lovely. It reminds me of the previous poem in the way it uses references to space.
do you find that rhyme helps? For me it often helps answer my second biggest question - What to say next.
posted by
2902
on February 4, 2010 at 10:02 AM
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This is fabulous and so positive,,,,you are truly being the best that you
can be and each day is better. Great post my friend.
posted by
Kabu
on February 4, 2010 at 9:37 AM
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Wonderfully done, my friend! Very thought inducing and flows perfectly..
Openness is breath easy and full indeed!
posted by
Katray2
on February 4, 2010 at 9:06 AM
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Lionreign
Great poetry, I can't think of anything more important than an open mind, in all things if possible. BF
posted by
BernieFranklin
on February 4, 2010 at 8:48 AM
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This is terrific. So important to have an open mind, and yes, it does enable you to begin to know who you are.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on February 4, 2010 at 8:20 AM
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