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That 'hole' of emptiness - so palpable yet, hope echoes. ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on February 5, 2010 at 8:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Snowview
Thank you!

posted by lionreign on February 4, 2010 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
thank you so much sweetie... I still feel like the lucky one though xoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on February 4, 2010 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

Re: This is just lovely what a nice person you are.
  thanks Kabu

posted by lionreign on February 4, 2010 at 7:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444
It certainly is!! Thanks sam

posted by lionreign on February 4, 2010 at 7:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: A Hole
Thanks 2902

posted by lionreign on February 4, 2010 at 7:11 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign
Thanks BC-A... that was one of my favourites too

posted by lionreign on February 4, 2010 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thank you so much... I rather think I am the lucky one for having such a muse

posted by lionreign on February 4, 2010 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Enchanting missing the other lyric!
Thank you PoetRaye, I am glad you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on February 4, 2010 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lionreign
Thanks BF!

posted by lionreign on February 4, 2010 at 6:55 AM | link to this | reply

Very apt imagery! Thanks for your kind comment on my post! Nita

posted by Nita09 on February 3, 2010 at 10:21 PM | link to this | reply

You are just so romantic my dear friend...  and your love is such a wonderful sweet love... pair that with your great talent and what we have are incredibly lovely poems like this one.  What a lucky lady  is that elusive muse of yours :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on February 3, 2010 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

This is just lovely what a nice person you are.

posted by Kabu on February 3, 2010 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

Longing is painful at times! This is a complete process in imagery with excellent congruity! sam

posted by sam444 on February 3, 2010 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

A Hole
Very apt and expressive metaphor - nicely developed!

posted by 2902 on February 3, 2010 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

lionreign

] I like the line absence of her eyes. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on February 3, 2010 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply

Your poems are just gorgeous, Lionreign. Whoever is the object of them is a very lucky person.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on February 3, 2010 at 11:58 AM | link to this | reply

Enchanting missing the other lyric!
Completion is a beautiful feeling/memory and you express it so tenderly and heartfully, artfully. 

posted by Katray2 on February 3, 2010 at 9:00 AM | link to this | reply

Lionreign
This is full of longing and passion suppressed, I love it. BF

posted by BernieFranklin on February 3, 2010 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply