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A good poem portraying the need for company

posted by adventurer02 on September 15, 2015 at 2:47 AM | link to this | reply

Pat
It was also our Gran's fault.  I've noticed this with our two granddaughters.  Ell almost slobberers over them trying to get them to take this or that.  She is always asking them if they want anything and picks up everything.  Her excuse is that she is spoiling them because they won't be children for long.

posted by johnmacnab on February 8, 2010 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

Where have I heard Naut's excuse before? Oh yeh - my sons talking to my daughters-in-law, and any one of my given ex's..... Liked your peom very much, Pat-B, so very easy to identify with the feeling.

posted by adnohr on February 4, 2010 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply

What Naut said............

posted by Corbin_Dallas on February 4, 2010 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice.
Sad but nice, is that an oxymoron? Great poem, Pat.

posted by Hackthorne19 on February 3, 2010 at 11:08 PM | link to this | reply

April Temptations
You've read my mind!  At this stage of my life solitude is welcomed at times.

posted by LuciW86 on February 3, 2010 at 11:05 PM | link to this | reply

PatB
Wonderful poem, guess you've arrived at contentment alone

posted by WileyJohn on February 3, 2010 at 8:45 PM | link to this | reply

Pat
Again, a great poem! And its true, we men are slobs, often sufficiently so that the acid of our slovenliness erodes the romance in our relationships...But it's all our mothers' fault - they indulged us, picked up after us, and loved us anyway! So we expect no less from our wives and lovers...

posted by Nautikos on February 3, 2010 at 6:31 PM | link to this | reply

By now we should know that every coin has it's flip side . . . and yet . . . 

posted by OutaBreath on February 3, 2010 at 6:05 PM | link to this | reply

If in the end it comes down to the little things the small but persistent
annoyances of sharing rather than the sunsets......the fat Lady has already sung her song. As usualaperfectly wonderful write.

posted by Kabu on February 3, 2010 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply