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Re: sam444
Thank you so much, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:41 AM
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Re: Beautifully done..
thanks Symphony
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:41 AM
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Re: yeap......you drawn the piece of trust and hope with love!!!
thank you so much, my dear friend
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:41 AM
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Re: Lionreign
Thank you BF
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:40 AM
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Re: Sinome
thank you so very much, my dear, I am delighted that you like this one so much. xxoxoxoxoxoxx
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:40 AM
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Re: Exquisite verse! Kudos...
Thanks PoetRaye, it certainly is
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:38 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Well if you have the choice, I would recommend sleeping through dawn and hearing about it from those who didn't :P
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:38 AM
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Re: and I hope that you love and laugh together...the joy of a new day
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:37 AM
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Avian choir, it doesn't get any better than that; I immediately thought of wren! And the daybreak in the eyes! WOW! Just loved it! Absolutely stunning! Masterful use of words, too! am
posted by
sam444
on February 1, 2010 at 5:38 PM
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Beautifully done..
posted by
_Symphony_
on February 1, 2010 at 2:12 PM
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yeap......you drawn the piece of trust and hope with love!!!
you are always amazing LION!!!
posted by
Star5_
on February 1, 2010 at 12:06 PM
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Lionreign
A tender melodic poem that captures it all. BF
posted by
BernieFranklin
on February 1, 2010 at 9:46 AM
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This poem , as I told you when I first read it, is one of your very best, and that is quite a compliment because all your poems are amazing. Those two last lines... seeing the dawn brake in her eyes... convey a tender intimacy that is very hard to relay. Excellent work Neil xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 1, 2010 at 9:39 AM
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Exquisite verse! Kudos...
Sunrise is even more enchanting with a Beloved by your side.
posted by
Katray2
on February 1, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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We're having some lovely sunsets at the moment, but I haven't as yet ventured out of bed early enough to greet the dawn! So it's good to read your poem and imagine it all for myself.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on February 1, 2010 at 8:55 AM
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and I hope that you love and laugh together...the joy of a new day
I felt this was written forus it is so perfect. I love your work our friend.
posted by
Kabu
on February 1, 2010 at 8:54 AM
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