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Very well written. You express yourself well.
posted by
mariposa75
on February 1, 2010 at 10:19 AM
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That is touching
brilliantly written - I was swept away by it
posted by
lionreign
on February 1, 2010 at 7:49 AM
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Beautiful and haunting..the essence of true love indeed!
posted by
Katray2
on February 1, 2010 at 7:35 AM
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Secret Love
Yes you really made it with this one Bernie,poignant.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 1, 2010 at 2:29 AM
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Secret love
Thank you all for your kind comments, I really appreciate it BF
posted by
BernieFranklin
on February 1, 2010 at 12:27 AM
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Y This is a great theme for love poems. Yours expresses it well. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on January 31, 2010 at 9:31 PM
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Bernie F.
Nice sleeve one to lean on and admire worn with a smile good job. Lv Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on January 31, 2010 at 7:30 PM
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Like sam said, Brilliant!!
When you wear your heart on your sleeve, others know your pain. They may not have a name, but the pain is there just the same. Great writing!
posted by
Budguy
on January 31, 2010 at 7:18 PM
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BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!! Astonishing! I am at a loss for words and that doesn't happen very often! Congratulations on a very fine piece!
I saw your comment; where do our daughters find these fellas! Wow! Mine is unhappy in hers but won't pull up her boot straps and come back home! Her boyfriend is way too far into booze. Prayer is all we have right now! Thankfully your daughter is only 17, she will mature markedly over the next few years! Mine did, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 31, 2010 at 4:00 PM
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