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I love the captain's peg leg sinking into the sand.  He should have had a camel.

posted by johnmacnab on February 2, 2010 at 4:46 AM | link to this | reply

Movie Script
Very good.  I've been waiting for a new pirate movie with Johnny Depp.

posted by LuciW86 on January 31, 2010 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

PatB
Sounds like fun for the oldtimers luv.

posted by WileyJohn on January 31, 2010 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

I think Rush and Depp would love your little epilogue black comedy fun.
I know that I do. I like Naut's touch and the monkey end is brilliantly ridiculous.

posted by Kabu on January 31, 2010 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

Awelarious!

posted by Ciel on January 31, 2010 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

LMAO, Pat-B! If you only knew how many pleasurable demises I dreamed up for that monkey. Your's was way better, LOL!

posted by adnohr on January 31, 2010 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

Pat
I love it, and as soon as I get the money from the Canada Council, we'll produce it! We need to make one minor revision, though - at the end, Jack offers his adversary not an apple, but some applejack...

posted by Nautikos on January 31, 2010 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

very enjoyable read.

posted by _Symphony_ on January 31, 2010 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent!!!! What a fun read! sam

posted by sam444 on January 31, 2010 at 6:17 AM | link to this | reply