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I adore the duality to this poem! It has mortal and spiritual connotations! So well written! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 29, 2010 at 3:26 PM
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BernieFranklin
Well done, you captured nature very expressively, a nice read..
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 28, 2010 at 12:45 PM
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Re: Raye
I appreciate your kind words
posted by
BernieFranklin
on January 28, 2010 at 10:13 AM
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Lovely and encompassing; very well done, Bernie!
posted by
Katray2
on January 28, 2010 at 9:14 AM
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lovely - I can almost see the river
and I feel somehow renewed
posted by
lionreign
on January 28, 2010 at 7:51 AM
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River
you have placed the feel of nature here, the river grows old as must all things. Nice one
posted by
C_C_T
on January 27, 2010 at 11:15 PM
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beautiful description of how the water feeds the planet one little part at
a time. Very inspirational
posted by
Tzippy
on January 27, 2010 at 11:08 PM
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