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Beautiful
Darling, today you have out romanced me by a mile.  Sublime xoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on January 25, 2010 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
A really fantastic poem! And I agree with Troosh - 'coloring time' is an amazing thought...

posted by Nautikos on January 24, 2010 at 5:35 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
"You were there.... colouring time" - Wow - doesn't that pretty much say it all!!!!

posted by Troosha on January 24, 2010 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice poem. I like it very much.

posted by mariposa75 on January 23, 2010 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply

A powerful image stamped onto one's mind.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 23, 2010 at 4:27 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful and serene

posted by PoetikliNclynd on January 23, 2010 at 3:02 PM | link to this | reply

Very Beautiful, Blessed Be.

posted by Nileangel on January 23, 2010 at 2:58 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
I love your words and the sounds of nature making your soul dance, the feelings that a person would need who has lost a love.

posted by WileyJohn on January 23, 2010 at 12:08 PM | link to this | reply

sinome
I could almost feel I was stood in the middle of the different trees you mention, a poem of pure love and need, I really enjoyed it. 

posted by BernieFranklin on January 23, 2010 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

and in this way those we love never leave us....again I am thrilled by this
post. Love you and your enormous talent.

posted by Kabu on January 23, 2010 at 10:20 AM | link to this | reply