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hahah very cool
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on January 25, 2010 at 12:44 PM
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Re: Poop
Although I lived overseas for many years, I am VERY American...I just wrote from another perspective... or voice... whatever. Glad you liked the ending!
posted by
dalie
on January 23, 2010 at 6:13 PM
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Re: Poop In A Bag
Ah, the fruits of a warped mind! I need to work on making this read a bit smoother but I
like the ending too!
posted by
dalie
on January 23, 2010 at 3:24 PM
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Now that was a clever twist! So much truth when one thinks about the way the garbage is disposed of in that area! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 23, 2010 at 3:11 PM
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Poop
I take it your not an American? I enjoyed the last verse
posted by
BernieFranklin
on January 23, 2010 at 10:21 AM
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