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Poignant...that's what I can say.
posted by
Straightforward
on January 23, 2010 at 12:10 AM
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Sinome
Trial and error this life, and very sad at times, and you portray it so well poetically.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 22, 2010 at 10:00 PM
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A great post illustrating how we learn as we go, and unfortunatley by the time we learn it's sometimes too late.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 22, 2010 at 4:15 PM
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Experience is the greatest teacher, isn't it! Thanks very much for your kind comment. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on January 22, 2010 at 7:51 AM
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Once hurt, twice shy. Beautifully expressed.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 22, 2010 at 5:15 AM
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Now
A very nice poem, very realistic at the end. Great
experience.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 22, 2010 at 2:59 AM
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This is really very, very good !
posted by
BernieFranklin
on January 22, 2010 at 12:30 AM
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such pain ...the end...oh darling your writing can break my heart.
posted by
Kabu
on January 21, 2010 at 9:16 PM
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oh dear!
posted by
Star5_
on January 21, 2010 at 9:11 PM
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Sinome, like a baptism of pain ~ this reached out and touched me ---- palpable *thumpthump bathump*
and the ending was clinched it. xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 21, 2010 at 9:04 PM
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Sinome
Wonderful, beautiful. Yes dear one. After it all we know what not to do!
posted by
Justi
on January 21, 2010 at 8:08 PM
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Simone
For sure love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLsZ
posted by
BC-A
on January 21, 2010 at 8:03 PM
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Of course experience teach us a lot
nice poem. Thank you for sharing. Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 21, 2010 at 6:59 PM
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