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What TAPS said.

posted by adnohr on January 22, 2010 at 5:15 AM | link to this | reply

PatB
Say a prayer for him,you can do that with ease and comfort for yourself luv.

posted by WileyJohn on January 21, 2010 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

Tough situation--if the group is like a workshop where editing is suggested to the writer.  If you have to say something, it's possible to pick some element you did like (if you're saintly) and a very specific comment or suggestion about a very specific phrase.  He might get a hint--nah. 

posted by OutaBreath on January 21, 2010 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

Try not to snore in an unlady like fashion as you drift off to sleep
Daintly little squeaks is all I will allow.

posted by Kabu on January 21, 2010 at 1:43 PM | link to this | reply

Difficult isn't it?
I'm not sure what the truth would really achieve at this stage.

posted by malcolm on January 21, 2010 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

Don't burst his bubble.  It may be all he has to live for.  I'll bet you can find some kind way to re-direct his attentions and aspirations.

posted by TAPS. on January 21, 2010 at 9:52 AM | link to this | reply

Pat
I don't know Maupassant's work well, but I liked what I have read. This new man in your circle strikes me as sad, more than 'hollow', maybe a bit like Maupassant himself, whose life certainly ended sadly...

posted by Nautikos on January 21, 2010 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

You should tell him
exactly what you told us lol

posted by Tzippy on January 21, 2010 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply