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This poem is giving me so much to think about.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 20, 2010 at 7:50 PM
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Sinome, there is so much depth in this poem, and I was moved -- a big sigh, and nodding of my head at:
"Clay thoughts want life like the mountain and the eagle.
The bound wishes to be free and calls his motions freedom."
Absolutely brilliant!!!!~ Sinome, xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 20, 2010 at 7:39 PM
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Sinome
This poem strikes so many chords and makes them sing...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 20, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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Yes we are
and you express it perfectly in this poem. Just when I think I have seen your best you bring out something new and shining so that I am unsure once again - kudos
posted by
lionreign
on January 20, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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Thou art waxing philosophical in a most readable and endearing way. Great work.
I love reading what you write.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 20, 2010 at 5:28 AM
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Beautiful imagery! Sometimes the best things are near at hand! sammie
posted by
sam444
on January 20, 2010 at 2:59 AM
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No fancy words from me, i just like it !
posted by
BernieFranklin
on January 20, 2010 at 12:44 AM
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we are all seaching for more
posted by
Lanetay
on January 19, 2010 at 10:50 PM
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We just are....that aptly sums your pearls of wisdom in the poem
posted by
Straightforward
on January 19, 2010 at 9:24 PM
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Sinome
This is an awesome poem. It is full of wisdom, and the truth of our lives until we sit and have a serious talk with our spirits, minds, directions and real goals. This is the state of life right now. Awesome truly a poem of wisdom. I shall be back to read it again. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on January 19, 2010 at 9:17 PM
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Meditation and just being....I do wish I was better at this art.
and why does the mind dwell more on where we went wrong than on where we did right. well my mind anyway. Again your poem has me thinking ...so wonderful always to read your works.
posted by
Kabu
on January 19, 2010 at 8:57 PM
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-Similarly to Dorothy in The Wizard of Oz we need to learn that truth’s right at our feet in the first place. 201KBC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on January 19, 2010 at 8:53 PM
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