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Such happy times, but the mood sure changes in the last line.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 19, 2010 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
You are the most romantic and loving lady, living with such melancholy thoughts so beautifully expressed

posted by WileyJohn on January 19, 2010 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

Nostalgia and beauty in every line!

posted by Nita09 on January 19, 2010 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

This poem is beautiful, only you can make me want to feel such melancholy. xoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on January 19, 2010 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply


posted by magic_moon on January 19, 2010 at 3:47 AM | link to this | reply

Wow Sinome this is love at its best    Thank you for sharing.  Chuck.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on January 19, 2010 at 1:58 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Poignant as also beautiful, all at once xoxoxo:

posted by anib on January 18, 2010 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

I have spent hours walking along the shore line trying to make sense of my
life....my life before dear Wiley that is........Your so graphic poem took me back there. a few words and you create such atmosphere.

posted by Kabu on January 18, 2010 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

The imagery is romantic ~ and the voice is so alluring and loving, my dear Sinome ~ xoxo Elyse

posted by elysianfields on January 18, 2010 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

It's beautiful Sinome, thank you for sharing - I love the image.

posted by shobana on January 18, 2010 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

GOODNIGHT DEAR SINOME

posted by Star5_ on January 18, 2010 at 7:55 PM | link to this | reply