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good writing
im coming back to the next chapter. I like the way you drop tiny little information buckets that are really bombs

posted by Tzippy on January 16, 2010 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Pat_B on January 16, 2010 at 7:00 AM | link to this | reply

I'm with Loretta, I was thinking that all along! sam

posted by sam444 on January 16, 2010 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply