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such life in these words; palpable desire and Love that permeates your every line, verse, yes, word. Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on January 14, 2010 at 6:34 PM
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breathtaking
this is stunning, I loved it
posted by
lionreign
on January 14, 2010 at 7:48 AM
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what nice memories
posted by
Lanetay
on January 14, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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What a great poem. It's true you know. Old letters, old poems, old scraps of notes....
I wonder if he kept any of them, as did I.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 14, 2010 at 6:45 AM
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Sinome
This one left me silent.... bittersweet, indeed.
posted by
Troosha
on January 14, 2010 at 6:15 AM
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This one is beautiful like kisses on the dress of a dead bride; the heartbreak is overwhelming. Somehow I feel there is such a hole in the heart of love here that you will share more of a little at a time with us. Be blessed beautiful lady.
posted by
Justi
on January 13, 2010 at 8:43 PM
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Sinome
Sad to have love just go up in flames or vanish,you express it so beautifully though
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 13, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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So many different emotions coursing through the speaker's veins.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 13, 2010 at 7:45 PM
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More heartbreaking words so wonderfully written. Sometimes a love
just does die especially if there was all passion and little else....but if two write together such beauty then perhaps one day a breeze will blow gently over the embers and a spark will renew.
posted by
Kabu
on January 13, 2010 at 5:55 PM
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