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Simple reminder
that behind every cloud lies the sun
posted by
malcolm
on January 13, 2010 at 12:27 PM
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You could be speaking of me and of the things that I love and look forward to.
These are some of the things that make life worth living.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 13, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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this is so beautiful
I read it twice just for the pleasure of it
posted by
lionreign
on January 13, 2010 at 8:14 AM
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As always a beautiful description of simple things we often take for granted.
posted by
elinjo
on January 13, 2010 at 6:51 AM
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Wonderful!
posted by
Budguy
on January 13, 2010 at 6:37 AM
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Shobana
A beautiful poem! And, as you know, I too like yellow roses...
And as to your comment in my latest 'Danish Cartoons' post - only a non-believer can properly analyze and understand religion...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 13, 2010 at 5:46 AM
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She saw two birds on a cable
Deep in conversation
I just love this to bits and pieces! What a fantastic poem! Your variety in imagery is depictive of your growth as a poet! It is so marvelous to witness! I know I owe you two e-mails and a number and I promise to get them answered today when I get caught up on my reading my Shobana! Love you dearly, too! your sam
posted by
sam444
on January 13, 2010 at 4:47 AM
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What a wonderful picture in words! Saw in Betty's post that you book is on bookrix--congratulations! I haven't been on it since registering, but now I will do so! Thanks very much for your warm comment. Hope I can brave the cold to see the celebrations in the little temple down the road!!
posted by
Nita09
on January 13, 2010 at 4:34 AM
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Bloomed
Thank you for review. This is nice, perhaps we should write about warm days Brr. It's snowing
posted by
C_C_T
on January 13, 2010 at 2:16 AM
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Beautiful poem...
posted by
mariposa75
on January 12, 2010 at 9:17 PM
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You're welcome chuck and thank you for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on January 12, 2010 at 8:51 PM
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Love the poem especially yellow roses is my favorite
thank you for sharing. Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 12, 2010 at 8:39 PM
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Shobana
Wonderful image and delightful picture painted as if i could actually see the story you painted for my eyes to see. Birds,Yellow Roses, Rain and of course your written Love in words.Fememefeme
posted by
fememefeme
on January 12, 2010 at 7:46 PM
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Darson - Yeah me too, thank you so much. Always a pleasure to have you visit me.
posted by
shobana
on January 12, 2010 at 7:43 PM
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I find this poem to be incredibly refreshing, especially during a season like winter where those things are nonexistent.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 12, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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Ah the birds, the rose, the beautiful person inspired by these values and views and then comes yet another element from rain (which is lovely) to sun --- brilliant!!! and your imagery is inspiring, Shobana ~ such ahhh factor I take from this. Elyse xoxo
posted by
elysianfields
on January 12, 2010 at 6:06 PM
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Re: shobana
I love roses and birds. Nice catch in poetic perception love. KBC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on January 12, 2010 at 5:14 PM
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shobana
Nice nostalgia love. KBC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on January 12, 2010 at 5:13 PM
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yellow roses are my favourite and like al lAustralians well nearly all
Australians I love the rain.
posted by
Kabu
on January 12, 2010 at 3:21 PM
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Mmmm I can almost smell that rain, so fresh! And I love yellow roses. Another good one.
posted by
Darson
on January 12, 2010 at 2:47 PM
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Beautifully done :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 12, 2010 at 2:33 PM
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