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posted by
malcolm
on January 12, 2010 at 11:07 AM
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Knock Out.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 12, 2010 at 10:57 AM
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I didnt know you knew what I look like
posted by
Lanetay
on January 12, 2010 at 10:13 AM
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Sounds like. . .
a walking stereotype to me. But, then I am cynical about media driven body image.
posted by
Budguy
on January 12, 2010 at 8:42 AM
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Very vivid picture! Thanks very much for your visits and kind wishes--sorry I've been "absent" for a while! Will catch up on your earlier posts now. Hope you're doing well. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on January 12, 2010 at 8:16 AM
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I like this and I when my diet is done I shall look somehting like that
well perhaps a little old and wrinkled.......LOL
posted by
Kabu
on January 12, 2010 at 7:16 AM
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Simple and yet effective
you describe an image perfectly within those lines, giving just enough detail for the reader to flesh out the image
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 6:41 AM
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One more comment, your poem was so vivid that I felt myself getting tense and wanting to go find my husband, just for reassurance. Who doesn't know someone like this?
posted by
Darson
on January 12, 2010 at 6:29 AM
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Re:
Betty, i have missed you for 2 whole days...you must have been very busy. Thank you - well I am comforted by the fact that we have each other..
posted by
shobana
on January 12, 2010 at 12:50 AM
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Dear Shobana, definitely not me either
! Never mind, we're OK in spite of that.
Keep well and have a very nice day.
posted by
elinjo
on January 12, 2010 at 12:47 AM
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A poem to dream on
posted by
skye08
on January 12, 2010 at 12:31 AM
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Dear Shobs
This is so delightful
and just when I was imagining it to be you, you shocked me by saying that it wasn't you
. But you know my imaginings, hahahaha
. Very sweet treat
posted by
anib
on January 11, 2010 at 7:54 PM
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Hmmm...this sounds like --- well, really I don't know. What a great ponderer ---
~ Write on Shobana ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 11, 2010 at 7:24 PM
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What a fun poem! Are you holding out on us my Shobana! I do know a person who comes very close to your description! Love you my dear friend! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on January 11, 2010 at 6:49 PM
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I think we all like you the way you are.
If you had been that person that you wrote about,
you probably wouldn't be here writing for us.
You would have paparazzi following you around
and you would have been doing crazy things like being a Play Boy Bunny.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 11, 2010 at 3:58 PM
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I definitely don't fit that description!
posted by
mariposa75
on January 11, 2010 at 3:52 PM
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Hard to see past all of that to the soul. That's why I like to assist people with seeing mine with not being a knockout...at least, not ALL the time!
Ha haha....
posted by
Darson
on January 11, 2010 at 3:49 PM
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FSI - LOL, thank you my friend..well just to show that you need to read the finer print. thank you for your visits to my blog.
posted by
shobana
on January 11, 2010 at 3:29 PM
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Don't be so hard on yourself.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 11, 2010 at 3:23 PM
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