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Re: lionreign
Thank you very much, from both of us
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:39 AM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
Thank you so much Chuck - your kind words are very appreciated.
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:36 AM
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Re: Elyse
Thank you so much, dear Elyse, both of us deeply appreciate your encouragement
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:29 AM
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Re: Shobana
thank you so much, from both of us
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:28 AM
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Re: excellent, u must be mentoring ur friend.......
Thanks Sue... I haven't actually, just encouraging her
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:25 AM
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Re: Awesome and mystical works, Lionreign, both of them!
Thank you so much - from both of us
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:18 AM
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Re: Sam
thank you so much for you comments, sam, they are always appreciated and even more so this time
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:15 AM
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Re: merkie
thank you so much for your support and encouragement
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:09 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thank you... and I am (with the help of everyone here)
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:04 AM
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Re: Both are stunning, in my opinion, Lionreign!
thank you, PoetRaye, from a poet of your calibre that means a great deal
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 7:01 AM
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Re: Darson
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 6:59 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you so much, dear lady, from us both. No this is not my usual muse, but is a creative powerhouse who I am happy to encourage - I suspect that with practise she may surpass me by miles (but don't tell her I said that :P).
Me too, or just my muse? Love you loads too, sweetie xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 6:53 AM
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Re: TAPS
thank you for both comments - I am passing all your encouragement onto my friend and I am hoping she will continue to write :D
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 6:48 AM
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Re: you are very perceptive
Thanks Tzippy - and for your comments on the poems too - they are very much appreciated by both of us.
posted by
lionreign
on January 8, 2010 at 6:46 AM
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lionreign
n Perfume in the morning’s a great way to begin your day. Your friend’s poem’s charming. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on January 8, 2010 at 5:53 AM
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Both are lovely romantic and fantastic
Keep on the good work
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 7, 2010 at 10:07 PM
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LionReign ~ Yours was very romantic - and with a titch of poignancy and passion --- and the friend's --- so magical - delightful - a very nice read. Thanks for introducing us ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 7, 2010 at 9:00 PM
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Lionreign - I loved both the poems. Memories was just so beautiful and Enchanted put me in a magical place. Thanks so much for your visit and lovely comment in my blog.
posted by
shobana
on January 7, 2010 at 7:01 PM
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excellent, u must be mentoring ur friend.......
posted by
Star5_
on January 7, 2010 at 6:47 PM
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Awesome and mystical works, Lionreign, both of them!
posted by
LizaM
on January 7, 2010 at 6:26 PM
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I liked memories wrapping with a special place; exquisite imagery all the way through! On Enchanted, I liked the rhyme scheme that set up a very good cadence! It sets itself up nicely with introducing the scene, the action and wraps with a promise if all can happened one will be rewarded! Fine congruity, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 7, 2010 at 2:19 PM
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Ah A royal treat Your love poem of memories! Marvellous! I am enthralleed by the images of your friends poem that tickle my imagination with a longing to read fiction about enchanted forests and encounters with the sprites! Both are excellent poems!Thanks for sharing Lion
posted by
merkie
on January 7, 2010 at 10:51 AM
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Oooops :-) came to re read that beautiful poem and noticed I had written in my comment "miss" instead of "meet"
Sorry ... perhaps a Freudian slip??? lolll no, just kidding , just an honest finger slip :-) xoxoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 7, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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Well, I think it's good and you should encourage her to write. Personally I like poems which actually say something, tell a story. Yours always do, and "Enchanted" does too.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on January 7, 2010 at 10:05 AM
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Both are stunning, in my opinion, Lionreign!
Dreamy, yet so vivid and present.
posted by
Katray2
on January 7, 2010 at 9:03 AM
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You are a seriously good poet.
posted by
Darson
on January 7, 2010 at 8:58 AM
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My dear friend... yoiur "daily offering" brought me scents I had forgotten... and I thank yoiu for that. Your words have such a power Neil... they shake my soul into remembering there is life out there to be lived :-) Your friends poem is delightful... right up my alley for as you know I am a big fan of Autumn's magic :-) I loved it ! Is she your muse? Gawd I want to miss that elussive darling that inspires such beauty in your mind. Love you tons :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 7, 2010 at 8:54 AM
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the first poem
is a beautiful string of words of love and the memory of love
the second poem is also very enchanted
posted by
Tzippy
on January 7, 2010 at 8:49 AM
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Also, your normal daily offering is fragrant and sensual and not too heavily scented.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 7, 2010 at 8:49 AM
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Well, since I've always been a fan of fairy tales, and had a woods nymph sister companion, I loved your friends poem. Once there was a fairy ring in my yard under a big tree. Every year I look for it again, but it was only that once.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 7, 2010 at 8:46 AM
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you are very perceptive
it is from the pill to the crotch
posted by
Tzippy
on January 7, 2010 at 8:43 AM
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