Go to Martas poems
- Add a comment
- Go to Lets just wish upon another star
I shall never look at smoke the same way again! I thought it to be very refreshing to have another star to wish upon; we rarely get it right the first time! Love you my dear friend! I haven't been out reading much the past couple of days! I have to spend time with my children, they just learned for certain their father has cancer! Their family does not produce survivors with three having succumbed to in the last two years! Like you said, another star may what they need! sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on January 6, 2010 at 4:48 PM
| link to this | reply
sometimes that second or even third star that is wished upon can bring the
greatest joy of all...the one that is meant for you.....I wished all my life and then suddenly....Wiley.
posted by
Kabu
on January 6, 2010 at 8:24 AM
| link to this | reply
beautifully written, sweetie
Sometimes the passion is just fleeting and even if the love remains the intensity of it is gone and staring at the empty space where it used to be you can only admit they were not the one.
Beautifully expressed xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on January 6, 2010 at 6:54 AM
| link to this | reply
perhaps it was not love that burned out
perhaps it was the illussion of love that has faded. For love is eternal by definition.
your poem is so beautifully put together that it is so moving and written so well and relecting such important points. You are talented.
posted by
Tzippy
on January 5, 2010 at 11:14 PM
| link to this | reply
a moving on poem and a good new year one, lots of love.
posted by
spiderfly
on January 5, 2010 at 10:27 PM
| link to this | reply
I hum, 'when you wish upon a star' --- Sinome so many lovely, wonderful metaphors and the imagery even, makes me feel as if I'm in your thoughts, your very heart. So moving ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 5, 2010 at 7:46 PM
| link to this | reply
Sinome
The comparisons are so in tune with the poignant thought that this poem will abide and endure in the minds of the readers long after it has been read. Great work! xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on January 5, 2010 at 7:21 PM
| link to this | reply
Beautiful work
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 5, 2010 at 7:20 PM
| link to this | reply
Excellent work...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 5, 2010 at 7:02 PM
| link to this | reply
An unfortunate reality faced by many couples every day...BTW, I think this might be the fastest I've commented on a post after it was made.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 5, 2010 at 6:57 PM
| link to this | reply