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Those moments are so wonderful and are to be cherished.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 5, 2010 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Grow with the seasons.

' This is a precise winter poem love. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst

posted by BC-A on January 5, 2010 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I try but a few minutes outside in the way below freezing conditions
"thin Aussie constitution"-love it!  I'm not way below freezing here, so the gentle cold front has a different effect than a true deep freeze like you're in.  Don't get me wrong, it bites your hands and ears here still, but it doesn't have that "lay down in your heavy jacket and just take a nap" sedative feeling.  I suppose "brisk" is the word of the day.

posted by calia14 on January 5, 2010 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

Re: elysianfields
thanks!  Glad you found it to be inspiring :)

posted by calia14 on January 5, 2010 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

I try but a few minutes outside in the way below freezing conditions
absolutely exhaust me. Must be my thin Aussie  constitution. But I so identified with this write I love it.

posted by Kabu on January 4, 2010 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

Wow, this is refreshing ~ like an exercise in breathing - being 'still' and the imagery is clean and clear - Calia this is inspiring ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on January 4, 2010 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply