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Re: Rockingrector_retd
I take that as the highest compliment... although truly I am a realist, the world is actually that beautiful if you look
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 11:07 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks BC-A, glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 11:05 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thank you, WileyJohn, glad it appealed :D
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 11:04 AM
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Re: What a storm indeed!
Thank you LizaM!
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 11:03 AM
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Re: Elyse
oooh well spotted... I had actually been reading Dickens the day I wrote this... I wondered if it had effected my word choice
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 11:01 AM
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Re: Janey
Bravo!! Absolutely right
Thank you for seeing it
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 10:59 AM
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Re: i must agree with everyone else
Thanks Tzippy. A great and wise friend of mine always tells me that things will always work out in the end, so if they haven't worked out yet, it's not the end, is it? keep smiling and the universe will provide
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 10:58 AM
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Re: Darson
Thank you - and welcome
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 10:53 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you - and oooh yes... I am a child of Amon-Ra (or as much as one can be in this land of mists and rains) and the winter is not my chosen home :P
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 10:53 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you! I thought of you when I posted this, as I have often enjoyed your poems about storms..
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 10:51 AM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha - glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2010 at 10:48 AM
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Yes, I'm afraid you're definitely an incurable romantic like me!! Great storm imagery and glad you can enjoy the storm.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on January 5, 2010 at 9:39 AM
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lionreign
' Lately I’ve walked in snow and rain on cloudy days. The other day 40 mph gales blew me. It reminded me of the sky scene in The Wizard of Oz. You share a pleasant comfort on rainy days: I remember the flowers of summer days. Dream Daydream. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on January 5, 2010 at 9:38 AM
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lionreign
Very expressive my friend.....
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 4, 2010 at 8:53 PM
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What a storm indeed!
Could experience near real time through your fantastic imagery..and the deeper meanings resonate hauntingly..much enjoyed your word usage too!
posted by
LizaM
on January 4, 2010 at 8:38 PM
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I love this --- so romantic and the voice of victorian era --- this is beautiful --- alluring ~ Elyse (made me feel warm at the end and I simply 'smiled')
posted by
elysianfields
on January 4, 2010 at 6:49 PM
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I may be stretching it and reading into your poem alot more than you intended - but I can totally sense a speaking beyond the physical storm to the inner storm of relationships which without the remembrance of better days leaves one without hope. Very well written!
posted by
janey_
on January 4, 2010 at 4:33 PM
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i must agree with everyone else
great poem, what i like is the transition of storm and resolve.
thanks for your support, just had a bad weekend, ill get over it lol the law is just not very just nothing we can do about it.
posted by
Tzippy
on January 4, 2010 at 1:51 PM
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Wow your lines sure have a lot of expression and passion in them.
posted by
Darson
on January 4, 2010 at 1:08 PM
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Excellent Lion This is a grand entry into a mysterious event tempered by the warmth of inner memories! Vivid representation! Missing the sunny days with inclement weather of winter?Brrrr!
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2010 at 9:55 AM
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wow that was amazing !!! I love storms Neil and now when the thunder rips I will remember this wonderful poem :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 4, 2010 at 9:48 AM
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Lion
Such a vivid (and effective) description of a storm! Isn't it grand that we can slip into warmer memories when it's blustery and cold outside.....
posted by
Troosha
on January 4, 2010 at 9:06 AM
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