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I find this poem to be incredibly poignant.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 4, 2010 at 4:31 PM
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Beautiful, it's great reading your soulful, expressive poetry! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 4, 2010 at 3:27 PM
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that was such a special poem
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on January 4, 2010 at 2:22 PM
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Simply breathtaking
Thank you also for your very kind comment on my last post
posted by
malcolm
on January 4, 2010 at 2:06 PM
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That was very well conceived and written! There is not much to say when it is time and so a less dramatic exit would be very appropriate! Stunning imagery, too! sammie loves through eternity for I believe that is when life will really begin!
posted by
sam444
on January 4, 2010 at 12:27 PM
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Time and thoughts have lead tyou to a most beautiful poem to share. May the flame of your insipation blaze across the page and live in the readers memory. A song carried on the wind to tickle lovers ears. Awesome Marta!
posted by
merkie
on January 4, 2010 at 9:59 AM
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the touch of such beautiful melancholy
can only ever be yours. well written, my friend and Happy New Year!!!!!!!!!
posted by
lionreign
on January 4, 2010 at 8:21 AM
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Very haunting and sad; well written emotions..
posted by
LizaM
on January 4, 2010 at 6:48 AM
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this made me cry-and with tears in my eyes i say:
what more can anyone need to know when they write something that touches the soul.(check the typos :)
posted by
Tzippy
on January 3, 2010 at 9:56 PM
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Powerfully moving - tugs my heart with the depth and the emotion and the passion. Such a good exercise this type of poetry - realizing mortality and how we view and how we want to be remembered and this is just fabulous, Sinome ~~~ another one of my favorites of yours. Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on January 3, 2010 at 7:06 PM
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Wonderful writing!
posted by
Budguy
on January 3, 2010 at 6:35 PM
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heart-wrenching...wow
posted by
Ariala
on January 3, 2010 at 5:57 PM
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I really enjoyed this....thank you
posted by
dunleavy25
on January 3, 2010 at 5:11 PM
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Sinome
Very powerful, if sad...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 3, 2010 at 5:09 PM
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...very powerful, very soulful...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on January 3, 2010 at 4:16 PM
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Not bad...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 3, 2010 at 4:15 PM
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So much in common, have we.
posted by
shadesofblue
on January 3, 2010 at 3:44 PM
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Don't go yet, 'cos we need yo right here'
posted by
Star5_
on January 3, 2010 at 3:43 PM
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