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Wonderfully done, Straightforward!
posted by
LizaM
on January 7, 2010 at 6:24 PM
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~ I hope you dance
posted by
Blue_feathers
on January 6, 2010 at 2:29 AM
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Please don't talk of loneliness . It hurts me.
posted by
afzal50
on January 4, 2010 at 5:23 PM
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Very clever writing
posted by
malcolm
on January 4, 2010 at 2:13 PM
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loved it!
posted by
janey_
on January 3, 2010 at 10:39 PM
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Touche! How very poignant! Wonderful cadence, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 3, 2010 at 9:33 PM
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Poignant verse! Very cleverand expressive!
posted by
merkie
on January 3, 2010 at 11:06 AM
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not a good place
posted by
Ariala
on January 3, 2010 at 6:24 AM
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Most of the time lost and loneliness are the same
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 2, 2010 at 11:01 PM
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Straightforward
Loneliness becomes lost, lost in loneliness ... to become one. Just loved it.
posted by
anib
on January 2, 2010 at 10:30 PM
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Yes, the two "L" words end up merging.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 2, 2010 at 3:48 PM
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yes, it's a not so happy union
posted by
Azur
on January 2, 2010 at 2:39 PM
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happy 2010
posted by
Star5_
on January 2, 2010 at 9:02 AM
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