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I like how the little ones bring the joy of the season to life! This was a very enjoyable read, I think I am out of breath! The lead in was absolutely fantastic! sam

posted by sam444 on January 1, 2010 at 4:04 PM | link to this | reply

Nice work...
I especially liked this line: "They were rosy-cheeked and came in like breezes off a glacier. " Poor little Skylar...

posted by Pat_B on December 30, 2009 at 10:02 AM | link to this | reply