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i love it, especially the last line!!
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on December 28, 2009 at 3:35 PM
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Sinome
This is very good - like so many of your poems, it induces, nay,
forces one to reflect...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 28, 2009 at 11:37 AM
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Yes.. in the shallows there are many treasures and just as many treacherous happenings too. Love the way you move my heart and mind into another world Sinome.
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 28, 2009 at 7:53 AM
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This is thought provoking...I specially love the last two lines. Thanks very much for your kind comment on my article. Hope you're doing well. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on December 28, 2009 at 7:33 AM
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so true
a legend in our own minds
posted by
skye08
on December 28, 2009 at 6:50 AM
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mind
Very nicely featured and delicately portrayed.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 27, 2009 at 11:33 PM
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Our minds contain so much it is a wonder it can hold it all...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 27, 2009 at 8:50 PM
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this is so good and has set my mind working. the journey of our mind
how shallow and unprepared was the mind of that girl that I once was. How difficult the lessons and how well that mind learned how to turn inward and leave the pain behind. See your poem has really set my thoughts flying. You are so special.
posted by
Kabu
on December 27, 2009 at 8:48 PM
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Sinome
Just love the style of its presentation and the jouney ... Well done as usual, my friend
posted by
anib
on December 27, 2009 at 8:46 PM
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...oh marta!! ...this is so good!! moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 27, 2009 at 8:43 PM
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