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Liza
Stunning - absolutely stunning.
posted by
Troosha
on December 23, 2009 at 7:28 AM
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Welcome to the fold.
All of us strive to be something. Whether it be a writer or a poetic or just someone who wants to communicate with the world and the world is here on Blogit. Welcome once again.
posted by
Hackthorne19
on December 23, 2009 at 5:43 AM
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Splendid stuff indeed!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 22, 2009 at 1:33 PM
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Most appreciated, Lionreign
posted by
LizaM
on December 22, 2009 at 8:20 AM
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Your word choice is superb
You bring the imagery to life with all its nuance with just a few well chosen words. I feel almost as if I was there with you.
posted by
lionreign
on December 22, 2009 at 8:17 AM
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Thank you, Ariala!
posted by
LizaM
on December 22, 2009 at 8:12 AM
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Nice poetry!
posted by
Ariala
on December 22, 2009 at 7:47 AM
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My heart is smiling..
A Big Thank You to all..
posted by
LizaM
on December 22, 2009 at 7:11 AM
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welcome to blogit
your talent will be sure to shine within the blogit family.
this poem is a great picture perfect description of the moment in time in a cold cold day, wonderful description
posted by
Tzippy
on December 21, 2009 at 6:29 PM
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LizaM
'Our world's merged comme il faut' bien formidable!!!Lovely, and reminds me of the forest we live in luv.
†Merry Christmas†
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 21, 2009 at 3:01 PM
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Beautifull :-)
posted by
Sinome
on December 21, 2009 at 2:32 PM
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...forlorn became enticing...well done!!...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 21, 2009 at 2:19 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on December 21, 2009 at 2:09 PM
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You have painted a delightful picture of a peaceful wintery forest. I especially like the following:
'jade imbued branches
sparkling richly with white of the heavens'
Thanks for sharing!
posted by
elinjo
on December 21, 2009 at 1:02 PM
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Thank you so much, Kabu, TAPS and Sam!
posted by
LizaM
on December 21, 2009 at 12:25 PM
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I really liked how it started out as splotches of gray, happenstance, the sun peaks through with color and then it develops into fresh, new and so enchanting! As you say; s it should be! I think it becomes more special when the end is the commencement! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 21, 2009 at 12:18 PM
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I love it! I love it! One of my favorite things on earth is a tree.
Yours is very special.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 21, 2009 at 11:03 AM
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Nature at her best needing no human such for perfection needs none.
I love this my friend.
posted by
Kabu
on December 21, 2009 at 10:03 AM
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