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Hi Betty, I am so glad you liked the poem and thank you for the warm welcome. I am however going to the east coast tomorrow..I had respite from all the going ons for 2 days..lol. It was too exhausting to say the least - just visiting places and tucking in the variety of foods here. I hope you are fine and I will visit you when I get back in a couple of days. Thanks so much for your visit and take care of yourself.
posted by
shobana
on December 18, 2009 at 1:03 AM
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Such incredible passion I find this poem to have.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 17, 2009 at 5:03 PM
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Hi Chuck, thanks so much for your visit..just a brief interlude with my thoughts.
posted by
shobana
on December 17, 2009 at 4:08 PM
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Nice to see you again Shobana and welcome home to Blogitville. The last verse was very powerful and very good IMO. Thanks for visiting and commenting so kindly.
posted by
elinjo
on December 17, 2009 at 9:36 AM
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This is excellent
welcome back
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on December 17, 2009 at 5:47 AM
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...wow! that is powerful! well done! moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on December 16, 2009 at 9:07 PM
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Shobs
Fantastic, the power and the confidence, the use of verbs of the last lines just blew me to admiration. Exceedeingly well done !
. And WeLcoMe ...
posted by
anib
on December 16, 2009 at 8:55 PM
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surging and sadly beautiful.
posted by
RomaKay
on December 16, 2009 at 7:55 PM
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Shobana, this is so moving, it could bring me to my knees...passionate and very poignant ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 16, 2009 at 7:47 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on December 16, 2009 at 7:41 PM
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VERY WELLWRITTEN AND COVERS SOMUCH OF THE HUMAN CONDITION
SAD BUT TRUE.
posted by
Kabu
on December 16, 2009 at 7:13 PM
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