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Sinome
".......It happened, I don't blame you,
we just ran out of time..."
Beautifully sad and you'd better not run out of time writing here girl or Kabu and me is comin' after y'all love
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 13, 2009 at 9:43 PM
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gripping...running out of time is a tragedy we all know something about to
some degree...very good writing!
posted by
Ariala
on December 13, 2009 at 7:34 PM
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...it happens...perhaps more often than not...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 13, 2009 at 7:31 PM
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Sinome
Very well told how time, without appearing to be destorying, destroys all xoxoxo
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posted by
anib
on December 13, 2009 at 7:10 PM
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Time seems to the be the culprit in ruining relationships.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 13, 2009 at 5:04 PM
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Such a sad thing to be going through, and yet it is so inventively expressed.
posted by
calia14
on December 13, 2009 at 4:23 PM
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Sinome
This is full of sadness and resignation, but also full of insight...And one would hope that you're not writing here of your own sadness...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 13, 2009 at 4:19 PM
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the truth
This poem really touched me because I unfortunately is going through this. It's very sad, because everyday it seems to change, it's ahrd to understand and even put into words. It's so interesting to me when I read something that is dead on at that moment of my life. You write beautifully.
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on December 13, 2009 at 12:46 PM
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I thought this poem was very striking. I hope it is only imagery for it is so awful to think that one's dreams and such would be forgotten by the one loved! Just rich, rich imagery that stirs all my senses! Love you sweetie! sammie
[You are one of my favorite imagery poets and this poem is so reflective of you innate talent]
posted by
sam444
on December 13, 2009 at 12:34 PM
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Your wonderful poetry shows just how special you are.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 13, 2009 at 11:45 AM
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Oh my heavens but this takes away my breath with the sorrow and the sadness - it haunts to linger - Sinome ~
~ your imagery and symbolism is rich - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 13, 2009 at 11:02 AM
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sadness personified as only our Simone can produce.
posted by
Kabu
on December 13, 2009 at 10:09 AM
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Sinome
two fugitives fromthe same sentence…It doesn’t get much more creative thanthat!!! Unfortunately, the overallsentiment is so very sad.
posted by
Troosha
on December 13, 2009 at 10:05 AM
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