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love the insightful grittiness and hint of irony of this poem...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 14, 2009 at 9:47 AM
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Well done! Loved the 'time wounds all heels'. It's okay to hurt, but that little 'up yours too' lessens the pan somewhat.
posted by
adnohr
on December 13, 2009 at 7:47 AM
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The water is cold this time of year.
I'd much prefer a bearskin rug in front of the fire.
Staring into a crackling fire is somehow healing.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 13, 2009 at 5:00 AM
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Well done, I would also suggest wearing a life jacket
posted by
Ariala
on December 13, 2009 at 4:27 AM
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