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another great poem...so descriptive, so meaningful
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on December 13, 2009 at 12:48 PM
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Beautiful and poignant!
posted by
Nita09
on December 13, 2009 at 6:09 AM
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Sinome
You make melancholy so poetically lovely luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 12, 2009 at 7:58 PM
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This almost felt like a sequel to the last poem, the mauve sunset being focal. I adored how the imagery was woven, like day to dark and back again, quickly but ever so smoothly! Way powerful! Love you so! sammie

posted by
sam444
on December 12, 2009 at 7:04 PM
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winter blues ...remembering sunnier days.
Oh sorry in this instance in Aust. blue means unhappy.
posted by
Kabu
on December 12, 2009 at 6:59 PM
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beautiful

posted by
shadesofblue
on December 12, 2009 at 6:58 PM
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...the other side of life...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 12, 2009 at 6:25 PM
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So sad.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 12, 2009 at 5:43 PM
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