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another great poem...so descriptive, so meaningful

posted by PoetikliNclynd on December 13, 2009 at 12:48 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and poignant!

posted by Nita09 on December 13, 2009 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
You make melancholy so poetically lovely luv

posted by WileyJohn on December 12, 2009 at 7:58 PM | link to this | reply

This almost felt like a sequel to the last poem, the mauve sunset being focal. I adored how the imagery was woven, like day to dark and back again, quickly but ever so smoothly! Way powerful! Love you so! sammie

posted by sam444 on December 12, 2009 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

winter blues ...remembering sunnier days.
Oh sorry in this instance in Aust. blue means unhappy.

posted by Kabu on December 12, 2009 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by shadesofblue on December 12, 2009 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply

...the other side of life...moon

posted by magic_moon on December 12, 2009 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

So sad.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 12, 2009 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply