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I guess there was a lot more going on in Vietnam then just a war.
posted by
Barry_Lee_Jones
on August 26, 2017 at 8:48 AM
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In regards to my opinion of you as a critic as well as more.
I think yeah ok, i like how sam44' ethos are competent. Thanks by the way did you think that the length was just horribly anticlimatic? Did you perceive so on early on as the themes were pryamidal? Or perceive so early with minimum reception that the story was not persuasive but more or less informative at best? My goodwill, idependence, what have you lacking dynamics from middle to end? Topically I was using old meat i guess! Thanks again Sam44! Feedback is always appreciated, and looked over by myself readerman33!
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readerman33
on December 5, 2009 at 3:27 PM
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I thought you did a nice job here! But, posts of more than 5,000 words will not attack many readers or comments on this site! You would be better served to break them into smaller pieces! sam 
posted by
sam444
on December 4, 2009 at 3:51 AM
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O We need humanitarianism love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on December 3, 2009 at 8:36 PM
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posted by
StrickGold
on December 3, 2009 at 11:37 AM
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