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yellowrose
So pleasing to the ears, the thought.
posted by
anib
on December 4, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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It's a first read for me and I think it's beautiful yellowrose and I miss Nitetide.
posted by
shobana
on December 4, 2009 at 4:11 PM
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I find the whole writing process to work that way as well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 2, 2009 at 6:54 PM
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Always enjoy a second read! I like how the ending are a bit of a surprise yet the imagery is clear! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 2, 2009 at 5:55 PM
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It runs!
Good verse in which you think fast love. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on December 2, 2009 at 5:38 PM
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Very nice indeed!
posted by
Nita09
on December 2, 2009 at 9:36 AM
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Very good ~ 
~ I really enjoyed ~ Elyse
*is nite tide here on blogit?
posted by
elysianfields
on December 2, 2009 at 6:58 AM
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I especially like the second one. That's great.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 2, 2009 at 6:48 AM
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