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This takes my breath away dear Sinome...such passion and fervent reminder - your poetry always brings such palpable feelings to surface and this one made my heart twitter with the emotion grasped. Lovely portrayals; imagery so rich ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 7, 2009 at 8:21 AM
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Beautifully written Sinome, it is.. and that is enough.
posted by
yellowrose55
on December 6, 2009 at 7:17 PM
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We're all missing you, Sinome.
posted by
anib
on December 5, 2009 at 9:18 PM
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To try to explain love
What a splendid depiction of love. You never know where it will take you.
posted by
2Philomena
on December 4, 2009 at 11:50 AM
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Sinome, love can be so simple, and yet so complicated at times...:)
Yes, we just have to fall in love and learn by trial and error, and take the good with the not-so-good, and , as you say, there's no manuals in the bookstore that can ever explain that..
...
posted by
Rumor
on December 4, 2009 at 9:17 AM
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This is beautiful, Sinome. We love because we love and that's about all there is to it, or rather just the beginning of a grand procession of enchantment.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 3, 2009 at 4:26 PM
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And this love that you try to explain Sinome comes from a very sacred heart and I hope that the same love is felt by the one who is loved. As usual a magnificent piece Sinome as only how you can tell it.
posted by
shobana
on December 1, 2009 at 9:44 PM
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Thought I;ll look you up again, Sinome for my own assertion "
we love, as simply as the wind blows.... xoxoxo -:)
posted by
anib
on December 1, 2009 at 9:18 PM
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I so agree, totally uninhibited and free like the wind, not know where it starts nor its end! Great similes, too! Love you like the wind! I have been editing my poetry 'til I think I might go mad! Changes and rewrites make me rue following that urge to send it off! Then, I am so close to the hard copy and it will be a matter of a final read, and much to my chagrin, I am out of ink. I have known it for more than a week this might occur but I dragged my heels and forced a delay of my own making! I am rather sure this is my last endeavor of this sort. I need a few rejections because I have labored over this one so much I will send it off until I fins a yes! lol sammy
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on December 1, 2009 at 2:40 PM
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"and as the wind that when blowing does not know that its blowing , but yet it blows and it is the wind"-what a perfect description!
posted by
calia14
on December 1, 2009 at 8:10 AM
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...love has its own logic that is cannot be understood by reason...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 1, 2009 at 4:41 AM
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Poignant and beautiful, as always! Thanks very much for your warm comment. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on December 1, 2009 at 2:07 AM
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Love is beyond words.
Beautiful as always and so profound.
posted by
skye08
on December 1, 2009 at 12:35 AM
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Sinome
I think it impossible to explain love, talk about it some, yes, but I have lived it twice ion my life and could not explain it I don't think. Wonderful poetry luv, shakes the imagination
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 30, 2009 at 4:59 PM
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One never knows what love is until one feels it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 30, 2009 at 4:14 PM
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Hi Sinome
Loved the love topic. It is in the heart one experiences the language of the feelings not of the intellect to be understood by the brain. Feeling is deeper than understanding. Experience cannot shared with someone who hasn't. xoxoxo -:)
posted by
anib
on November 29, 2009 at 7:51 PM
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