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Lovely poem and the essence of love captured so beautifully in it.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on December 1, 2009 at 8:48 AM
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Shobs
The imagery with such a powerful appeal, picking one pebble from the shoreline, is just great! Great poetic outpourings
on
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posted by
anib
on November 30, 2009 at 11:35 PM
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Hi, shobana what timeless love.......beautiful!
posted by
shamasehar
on November 30, 2009 at 10:19 PM
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So vivid & romantic! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 28, 2009 at 5:07 PM
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Hi Nita, thank you so much for the wishes and I meant every word I said to you. I am lucky to have found a friend in you too.I truly understand what it is like to be in your situation as it is in every traditional Indian family. Thank you so much once again.
posted by
shobana
on November 28, 2009 at 5:04 PM
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Shobana, this is so beautiful! I caught up with the last post now, so belated but sincerest wishes for your birthday--what a lovely cake and photo! Thanks ever so much for your very generous and warm comment on my post--not quite deserved! You're too kind, and I'm lucky to have friends like you! Have a good weekend. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on November 28, 2009 at 5:23 AM
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shobana, beautifully done! The pebbles along the shore are endless, just
as the love between two people should be endless..
...
posted by
Rumor
on November 27, 2009 at 5:24 PM
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It was worth it - the wait I mean and yes the snail mail could get there faster!!LOL. Thank you sweetie for liking the poem and yes It would be a lucky thing to have that happen. I had a great conversation with her as usual..it's the wait that gets to me....grrr.. thank you darlingm I love you too just the same and have a lovely time reading.(It's raining heavily here and the emoticons are not working!! but you know it's hearts all the way for you)
posted by
shobana
on November 27, 2009 at 3:03 PM
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I just saw your comment! My goodness when you said slow, I had no idea that the snail mail (lol) could get there faster! Wow! Two hours is such a long time to wait! I so hope it was worth it! Since I came to say hello, too, I grabbed another read and this is such a fantastic line:
He brings with him the brightness of the dimming light! Shouldn't every girl be so lucky as to have this happen! It was so good to hear from you! I trust you had a great conversation as well! Love you like the shinning sun that never goes behind a cloud or sets from view! You sam
posted by
sam444
on November 27, 2009 at 2:51 PM
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Shobana, what wonderful, no beautiful imagery - I feel the movement from your writing ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 27, 2009 at 1:22 PM
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Nothing more romantic than a walk along the beach hand in hand....On a gray November day you've rekindled romantic memories....Thank you.
posted by
elinjo
on November 27, 2009 at 6:15 AM
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I miss reading your poetry..always beauty pouring from it. Romance at the shore, now that's the place for love's embrace.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 26, 2009 at 9:07 PM
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Wonderful imagery and romance...brings back memories of the shoreline I used to walk.
posted by
mariss9
on November 26, 2009 at 9:01 PM
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It is endless and timeless equally for me! I love how the pebble is so representative of the big picture; how it ties the imagery together! This is awesome imagery, my Shobana! I had company and it has taken some time to get to your poem! But the first holiday is complete now black Friday is upon! A big shopping day with great gifts at great prices provided one wants to wait in lines and hope to get there before all is sold out! I did one one year, very early in the morning to get a pair of dolphin earrings for my daughter when she was a teenager! I have not done it since for this shopping day can bring out the worst in people! Your sam loves you and I love how you are posting amid all the things you need to get done by the middle of January! Thank you for the Thanksgiving wish, so nice to of you to think of us!
posted by
sam444
on November 26, 2009 at 5:48 PM
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Thanks for the Thanksgiving wishes and a great poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 26, 2009 at 5:26 PM
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Re: There is nothing like the shoreline to help ones mind to think. Picking up
Hi darling, thanks so much. yes I'd like to think so too.
posted by
shobana
on November 26, 2009 at 2:33 PM
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There is nothing like the shoreline to help ones mind to think. Picking up
tiny pebbles just what one will do.
posted by
Kabu
on November 26, 2009 at 2:30 PM
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