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I like this one and how the title is indemnic to the poem. Also like the simplicty of theme and meter. But why all the periods (.)? A period is just a stop sign--so what am i supposed to to, stop and look both ways? Just because you're the poet dosn't make you a traffic cop.

posted by jfm32 on November 21, 2009 at 1:04 PM | link to this | reply