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I find myself somwhere beween a descriptive narrative and a painting, and how us impatient poets like to do the short hand of both--which might explain why poetry is what it intends--that the description might actually include the experience with such meagar evidence as a painting in the brevity of words. Wonderful rendition on a mudane subject--not that my heart is actually palpitating. But, for me it was not what you said but how you said it. But isnt that the public secret of a poem? A silent thriller.
posted by
jfm32
on November 19, 2009 at 6:08 PM
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Golden Silhouette of trees a lovely name for a really lovely poem. Thank yo
posted by
Kabu
on November 19, 2009 at 4:08 PM
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I read this an hour ago but I had trouble loading the page! UGH!!! It was such a descriptive poem with oustanding, flowing imagery! I especially liked:
But wild, bright graceful silhouettes
Brimming with life
Such a fantastic sight .
I know you wrote it, but don't you just love this close! It is grand!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 19, 2009 at 1:51 PM
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