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Sometimes high sometimes low..
You depict the fluctuations of mood wonderfully. We've all been there.
posted by
2Philomena
on December 4, 2009 at 11:46 AM
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Thank you TAPS for that poetic advice
posted by
Straightforward
on December 1, 2009 at 9:07 AM
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The roller coaster ride of life
posted by
skye08
on December 1, 2009 at 1:47 AM
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Straightforward - Been there and done that..LOL. cute poem.
posted by
shobana
on November 30, 2009 at 8:43 PM
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Ahh ... yes ...
It is so good to be back here!
posted by
DivineM
on November 29, 2009 at 5:14 AM
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I can relate with those highs and lows...beautifully put.
HAPPY THANKSGIVING Straightforward.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 26, 2009 at 11:52 AM
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HAPPY THANKSGIVING STRAIGHTFORWARD
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 25, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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Concise but beautiful in every way
Well written
posted by
lindo
on November 24, 2009 at 1:34 PM
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Great movement --- ebbs and flow and high and low ~ lyrical
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 24, 2009 at 8:47 AM
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that's a good ending
I really liked this poem. And yeah, I really liked the ending. The thing about high and low was great. Who knows which way you'll go tomorrow? Nobody does. But I hope more people will go up than down.
Have a wonderful day.
posted by
kasperhoe
on November 24, 2009 at 2:52 AM
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...and isn't life perpetually, eternally like that? where to find equanimity? moon
posted by
magic_moon
on November 21, 2009 at 11:01 PM
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Wistful thinking!
posted by
malcolm
on November 20, 2009 at 10:22 AM
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Sometimes high sometimes low...
We've all been there. I felt a lot like that before I started concentrating full time on my writing. Well done!
posted by
2Philomena
on November 20, 2009 at 8:08 AM
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I hope the lows are not too low
and there is strength though winds may blow
and though the waves may o'er you flow
at times--hang on, no matter how you feel
and hold your life to even keel
awaiting sunset's glow
posted by
TAPS.
on November 20, 2009 at 7:08 AM
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Straightforward
Wonderful, the highlows of life, just like stilettoes
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posted by
anib
on November 19, 2009 at 10:26 PM
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Life's been an emotional roller coaster for me too.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 19, 2009 at 5:03 PM
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exactly, how do you know this well.....
posted by
Star5_
on November 19, 2009 at 4:39 PM
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Just like me....I never know which way is up or whether I am coming
or going. I reallyidentify with this but I don't like much the low times.
posted by
Kabu
on November 19, 2009 at 4:10 PM
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I adore your poetry! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 19, 2009 at 2:30 PM
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so true and straight to the point
posted by
spiderfly
on November 19, 2009 at 11:27 AM
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