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i LOVE THE PLEADING FOR ACCEPTANCE IN THIS POEM.
Life is tough sometimes.

posted by Kabu on November 19, 2009 at 4:30 PM | link to this | reply

see when you feel you should try and make someone happy but for some untold reason you hold back we then are punished by guilt.  If we give in to our guilt then how can we expect happiness.  must we just be grateful for what we get.

posted by spiderfly on November 19, 2009 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

It does seem to be easier said than done, but I love the line, 'I want to hold your heart'! How utterly precious! sam

posted by sam444 on November 19, 2009 at 5:14 AM | link to this | reply