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Re: very good poem
thanks!
posted by
calia14
on November 24, 2009 at 6:52 AM
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very good poem
posted by
Tzippy
on November 23, 2009 at 1:12 AM
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Re: jfm
Your comments always make me jump into a whole new train of thought!
posted by
calia14
on November 21, 2009 at 8:41 PM
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This one travels fast, but not as a stream of consciousnes, but a poem written without stanzas without a "break" (interesting line..."break in life") that appears to be the swivle point of two moments traveling so fast, there is no consecutive notion and a bit of a blur--hey, just thinking like a finger painter (which might have to do with the mental state of my teenagehood). Two passing moments turning into eachother without a passage of time. Always wondered about having a direct impression about something without being able to get my arms around it.
So I guess I just had a new experience of something.
posted by
jfm32
on November 21, 2009 at 6:41 PM
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Very nice poem, it does open the mind
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on November 21, 2009 at 1:56 AM
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Very interesting. Well done!
posted by
TAPS.
on November 19, 2009 at 4:06 PM
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The time does slip away! I wonder how much I have spent in frivolity over the course of my life! A most excellent poem that induces so much pondering for me, too! sammy
posted by
sam444
on November 19, 2009 at 9:16 AM
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I enjoyed reading your deep poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 18, 2009 at 6:39 PM
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In any event time goes by, love. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on November 18, 2009 at 5:50 PM
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One of my all time favorite songs was of THE WHO --- teenage wasteland and somehow that made me as a teen feel invincible --- like it was cool to be laid back and so open to all that came my way ~ I enjoyed this poem, Calia - it reminded me so much of some years back and I remember 'good' ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 18, 2009 at 5:16 PM
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Excellent ! Loved it Callia Great work. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 18, 2009 at 3:26 PM
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I really liked to read your poem. I'm not really sure if I ever visited your blog before. But then this is the first (but I don't think it's the last) time.
Have a wonderful day. :)
posted by
kasperhoe
on November 18, 2009 at 1:20 PM
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Wasteland
The meaning for me was a deep rooted echoes of time to embelish and savor as I read your poem. Lv. fememefeme
posted by
fememefeme
on November 18, 2009 at 11:19 AM
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