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a beautiful poem,
It left me wondering : is the room you mention still there? I don't think i'll ever see my childhood house again, can you go back to that place of you wanted???
posted by
lindo
on November 22, 2009 at 9:54 AM
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Do I hear something here? You got me thinking about what Meister Eckhart (a mideval monk) once said--that if we thought we had lost something, the first place to look is where we last left it. Been following your writes, and it's been quite a quest. So all I got to say is halleighluha because I just found our how to spell it!
posted by
jfm32
on November 21, 2009 at 7:27 PM
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Nostalgic and poignant!
posted by
Nita09
on November 20, 2009 at 3:02 AM
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Sinome
Lovely, and you GO back in your minds here, and have taken me with you, and it was so beautifully peaceful
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 19, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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I need to go back there...
Very poignant and atmospheric!
posted by
2Philomena
on November 19, 2009 at 12:55 PM
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You described it so well I felt like I was there.
posted by
mariposa75
on November 18, 2009 at 10:07 PM
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Thank You.
Love ANROHA25
posted by
ANROHA25
on November 18, 2009 at 6:46 PM
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I feel the mood of that room in the attic love. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on November 18, 2009 at 5:46 PM
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Sinome, this sounds like a very special room...I hope the smiles
outnumbered the tears..
..
(my "special" room was a walk-in closet where I had an old fold-down desk and small lamp...I really miss that room at times....that's where my first poems and stories were born.....)
posted by
Rumor
on November 18, 2009 at 5:33 PM
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You are the Star
posted by
skye08
on November 18, 2009 at 5:14 AM
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I find this to be incredibly powerful.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 17, 2009 at 7:28 PM
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What great imagery in this poem. I want more of it. Maybe a book and movie of that place.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 17, 2009 at 9:38 AM
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I always make a little site where god and I feel close
It's just what I do wherever I live.
posted by
Kabu
on November 17, 2009 at 8:37 AM
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I love a cozy room to write and commune with the Lord as well! Such striking imagery my dear Sinome! I have a miserably migraine that has gone on for days, so painful but I love you ten times that amount of pain and it makes it bearable! GOTCHA!!!!!
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on November 17, 2009 at 8:31 AM
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Cozy, peaceful and inspiring ~ this room, in your attic --- lives within your heart eh? ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 17, 2009 at 8:16 AM
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It sounds a nice place to go back to.
posted by
elinjo
on November 17, 2009 at 6:44 AM
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boooootiful as always
posted by
Star5_
on November 16, 2009 at 10:45 PM
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Lovely
Wish you a wonderful day. Chuck
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on November 16, 2009 at 10:22 PM
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