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Always love reading your poetry, the raw, heartwrenching beauty of it, as if I'm able to reach out and touch every word.
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 26, 2009 at 8:10 PM
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~ when I read your poetry, it's so palpable with feelings that I am quiet, listening as I read...your heart is very passionate and strong ~ youth is fleeting but I believe yet, another excellent experience is just around the bend. Touching as always --- xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 16, 2009 at 8:24 PM
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Like young - - -
Nonsense but you take action love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 16, 2009 at 6:03 PM
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Getting through times like those makes one stronger.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 16, 2009 at 5:12 PM
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well I get that scary feelings....I hide emotions and try to stare at me as
a fool who doesn't understand nothing about this life or world
posted by
Star5_
on November 16, 2009 at 3:42 PM
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I know those feelings very well
posted by
Lanetay
on November 16, 2009 at 11:26 AM
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If you are feeling empty you have room to fill with new experiences .The choice is yours in freedom
posted by
merkie
on November 16, 2009 at 10:35 AM
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The answer is to reach out to someone in giving comfort to them.
“For it is in giving that we receive.” ~ St. Francis of Assisi
posted by
TAPS.
on November 16, 2009 at 4:09 AM
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Sometimes the festive season closing in can bring a feeling
of sadness and loneliness perhaps I am fighting it a bit myself. I wouldn't be any where in the world but here with dear Wiley but it does remind one of childhood times long gone etc.
posted by
Kabu
on November 15, 2009 at 9:11 PM
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So very sad Sinome
. Hold on, the melancholy will give way to the already arising strength from within ... just watch... the day after tomorrow, I'll wait for another of your poems in elevation Ok?
posted by
anib
on November 15, 2009 at 9:08 PM
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surviving the loneliness and pain - perseverence comes to mind - thanks for sharing
posted by
janey_
on November 15, 2009 at 9:03 PM
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Very sad but very powerful
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on November 15, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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