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Pat
Clearly, the plot thickens...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 16, 2009 at 6:30 PM
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posted by
Azur
on November 16, 2009 at 5:40 PM
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I'm hooked.
Give me more. I think you have the dialogue down (excuse the pun) pat Pat. excellent. the story seems real and I fully understand that you at some point, edit it. Keep banging those keys.
posted by
Hackthorne19
on November 16, 2009 at 5:52 AM
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PatB
Well I'm shocked but why? That's how life works really. Well done luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 15, 2009 at 7:59 PM
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If the event had been less terrible, if jury had been wiser, then Michael would not have sufficient motivation for his next moves...
Writing a tough scene like the rape I think gives many a writer pause--because we are about to tell the world we have such thoughts in our pretty little heads... we can imagine and put words to the horrific.
It takes a certain kind of ruthlessness in regards to self-protection, a certain kind of courage.
Kudos!
posted by
Ciel
on November 15, 2009 at 8:37 AM
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Oh no! How could you do that? I know it's good for the book, but...but...but...
posted by
TAPS.
on November 15, 2009 at 7:16 AM
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Not only will it keep them reading but they will also be filled with righteous indignation that the Judge and jury could be so gullible and naive. The rapist deserves a very sticky ending.
posted by
elinjo
on November 15, 2009 at 7:09 AM
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Whoa...that should keep 'em reading! Good work!
posted by
Ariala
on November 15, 2009 at 5:17 AM
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