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question is are you controlling the story
or is the story controlling you. I guess a bit of both is a writer's life. Stephen King is one of my all time favorite writers. I always understood him, I can understand you too. Just as long as you keep stringing it along the road to completion.
posted by
Tzippy
on November 14, 2009 at 9:16 PM
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Pat
I can see why this made you cringe - but the guys come-uppance will be that much sweeter...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 14, 2009 at 5:35 PM
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My kind of story.
Keep at it Pat - there's nothing like a good revenge story to keep me, at least, riveted to the computer screen. Excellent!
posted by
Hackthorne19
on November 14, 2009 at 3:59 PM
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PatB
Oh you've got me hooked now, Mikey just has to take care of that creep, He has to find a 'Bubba" and get this creep that hurt his momma spread-eagled on a bathroom floor in a dirty garage and you knoew..........and let momma watch..........and, and, and, go git him luv...
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 14, 2009 at 1:00 PM
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Do you sometimes write stuff and wonder that you had it inside you to even
know about it and the appropriate words. and make it so real.
Don't let this book do all its own writing .....delete that thought, it is going to be an absolute gem.
posted by
Kabu
on November 14, 2009 at 11:08 AM
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I'm not surprised--it's the direction the world is moving. I can hardly stand to watch the news anymore.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 14, 2009 at 10:14 AM
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Very dark indeed
but compelling too
posted by
malcolm
on November 14, 2009 at 7:32 AM
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to some degree, it sounds like the story is writing itself...
posted by
Ariala
on November 14, 2009 at 5:47 AM
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Rapists by definition are nasty characters, but the one you describe sounds really vicious. Seems as though you had a successful day's writing.
posted by
elinjo
on November 14, 2009 at 5:39 AM
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Pat B
That’s happening with my family screenplay. I’m going for PG-13. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on November 14, 2009 at 5:33 AM
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